Here is what i wrote about the story:
The sky is colour black and little bit of green
It looks like a scary house.
The people are so-so scary the people can't go inside.
The home is small like an old rusty bed.
The home is so-so-so desgusting the people can't go inside, even I can't go inside.
I was scared. This homes is so- so-so yuck.
The end
Hi there, my name is Ellen and I am a student in room Witamata at Waikowhai School. I really like your writing. It made me think of a scary house . Have you thought that you can add some more ideas?
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